Celebrate the Sinner takes place against the
backdrop of the lumber trade in Oregon during the Great Depression. The
family featured doesn't put the “fun” in dysfunctional: Marie,
the mother, is a lonely alcoholic with serious boundary issues; Merle,
the father, is an entrepreneurial sort whom the reader never gets to
know; Teddy, their son, copes. They move to a house that gives real
meaning to the word “ramshackle” when Merle acquires a sawmill.
The descriptive writing here is mostly very good; the reader
is introduced to the cacophony and grit of living on an industrial site,
the constant fear of fire, the broken men who work there. There are
intermittent reminiscences by the now-elderly narrator, whose only
pride is in his undiminished sexual prowess. He casts off wives and
girlfriends when they become ill and just looks for the next hot
encounter. These asides are jarring, because the reader is left
trying to figure out how he got from here to there. We are witnesses
to Teddy's difficult, but not friendless, childhood; his problems in
school overcome by Miss Cherry, a kind teacher; his relationships
with the various characters who work at the mill; his inquisitive mind.
A novel full of flashbacks and asides requires a lot of heavy
lifting on the part of the author. The long passages about his father
entering the business are interesting, but his use of the first
person (“The question had to have caught Dad off guard”), and his
references to minutiae that he, a young child, would have no way of
knowing (“Dad's heart was pounding in his ears. Sweat tracked cold
along his ribs.”) don't ring true. If his Dad was so standoffish,
how did Teddy ever get to know these things about him? One cannot
imagine his brusque, businesslike father offloading these stories to
his young son. Teddy is sensitive and has a moral compass; in a book
full of bridge metaphors the bridge between his youthful self and his
narcissistic dotage is not at all discernible. The book may have been
a better read if the author had chosen to make Teddy an unreliable
narrator, though that is also a huge challenge.
Then there is the issue of editing. It always raises its ugly head: “'Mills burn,' Dad said, settling into a tone that Moses likely used when he spoke to the apostles from the mount, 'either through bad luck or bad judgment.'” I don't remember
Moses having any apostles. There are misspellings of names, such as
Buster Keaton's, and other little dents and nicks. There is not
enough variety in the vocabularies of vastly different people.
My quibbles should not detract too much from the book's good qualities. The depictions of the lumber business, the bad deals, betrayals, and bootlegging, are excellent. The reader gets a window on a little-known part of life during the Great Depression.
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